Before you pay an editor

The self-editing pass to run before anyone else reads it

A developmental edit runs into the thousands and takes weeks. Clearing the mechanical problems first means the editor you hire spends their time on the things only a person can see.

Mechanical first
Fix what a machine can see before paying for eyes.
Per chapter
Work through it in the order you wrote it.
No lock-in
Export your text whenever you want it back.

Self-editing fails in a predictable way: you read what you meant instead of what is on the page, and the fortieth read is worse than the first. Measurement does not have that problem. It cannot tell you whether the chapter works, but it can tell you that eleven sentences in a row start with "She" and that you have used "suddenly" sixty times.

Start with the countable

Spelling, doubled words, dialogue punctuation, unbalanced quotes. Fast, unambiguous, and nobody should pay an editor to catch them.

Then the habits

Crutch words, repeated openers, echoes, and pet phrases across the whole book.

Then the rhythm

Sentence length variation is the number most worth watching. Uniform length is what makes competent prose feel flat.

Leave the story to a human

Whether the midpoint lands, whether the ending is earned, whether anyone likes your protagonist: not measurable, and this product does not pretend otherwise.

How it goes

  1. 1

    Import the draft

    The whole book, not a chapter at a time.

  2. 2

    Clear the mechanical findings

    Accept or reject each one.

  3. 3

    Look at the whole-book patterns

    Pet phrases and crutch words are the ones you cannot see from inside.

Questions

Can this replace a human editor?

No, and it is worth being direct about that. It catches what is countable. Structure, character, pacing, and whether the book works are judgements a person makes.

What order should I edit in?

Structural problems first if you already know about them, since rewriting a scene throws away any line editing you did to it. Then mechanics and repetition, which is what this tool is for.

How long does a pass take?

The measurements are immediate. Working through the findings on a full novel is usually a few sittings, and you can stop and come back.

Clear the mechanical problems first.

Run a free pass.
Self-Editing Checklist for Novelists | EditWithPaige